week#4
my alarm going off ding ding ding. I woke up turn on the stove to make breakfast. when I was getting dressed my baby was crying and there was smoke. I ran for my to get my baby and called the firemen. I went to my balcony and passed my baby to them and they carried us down. We made it out ok.
You are VERY creative when writing stories. I just wish you would slow down and take the time to proof read it so the punctuation would be better. I love reading them though!
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